Narrative/storyline

We have discussed as group many different ideas for possible story lines and what kind of twist we could create in the storyline to include in our trailer to make it more exciting. The idea that we all agreed on and liked the sound of is to have our female assassin work for someone, but at the same time have an everlasting grudge against men due to a taunted past she may have (that would be developed in the actual film). But at the end of the story all this revenge she is taking out on other men turns around on her and ends up with her becoming the victim. We are thinking of putting this in the end of our trailer by having the whole trailer about her being the independant powerful assassin and then at the end we will show her in a vulnerable position and have her being the one in trouble. We believe this cliffhanger type ending will give the trailer a good twist and will give the audience something to think about and want to find out what happens by coming to see the film.